Friday, 7 August 2020
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Hi there Gunveen, I really like how you put a picture of the layers on a volcano and how names of the layers are on there. Maybe next time can you try and add some more detail e.g a photo of a real volcano to compare what it looks like, or add more words to explain what your task was. Keep up the good work! Your friend, Olivia.
ReplyDeleteHi Gunveen,I really like your detail on this post about what's inside a volcano. Maybe to make this post a little better, you could add more detail about the earth's crust and what it is made out of and keep up the good work.
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